Note: Since I was going through some of my old creations today, I thought of sharing this one of my heart-felt poetry which I wrote for my friend for her quick recovery after an awful accident that changed the course fo her life. This BALLAD will be divided into various parts as I am not in the will to post it without the element of curiosity. I have posted it before too on my old blog but many of my new friends haven’t been entertained so here you go with the first part – if you have read so re-enjoy and for fresh readers, *fingers crossed* (hope you like it).
Sometimes, my eye can betray me as well.
Whenever I think of you
I feel on me the dew
My hands sweat
My eyes become wet
Seeking around, finding someone
Who promised to be always by my side in the long run
I am struggling and fighting to recognize his voice
Lusting for the touch of his hands, smell of his body or my choice
My memories inundated with him only
Thus he left me forlorn and utterly lonely
He promised to build me the fountain of happiness
Money paid no heed, I loved his struggle effortless
He assured and reassured how he loved me the most
His confessions false, his existence reminiscent of a ghost
I was folly to think how he was the ONLY ONE for me
The reckless cheeriness and his ways responsible for my glee
One day he turned to me like a rock
Almost numb, my mindset shock
I wondered at his condition that day
My hand resting on his, consoling him to tell what he ought to say
He hesitated to proclaim his disappearance forever soon
He walked away leaving me under the blood dripping dark moon
To Be Continued…
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This is Naima, a 17 year old gal who spends her time studying (for good grades and getting into the desired university) , reading, writing, blogging and debating. Writing is my hobby. I started this journey of writing at the age of 8 when all I was supposed to write was my daily routine over and over again. I try to personalize my thoughts in the most unique way to leave an ever lasting impression by discussing either deep or philosophical thoughts with my tender poetic touch. Poetry is the soul to my writing skills and I rather prefer to write verses and stanzas on the behalf of prose. According to me, poetry is a symbolic language where every other person perceives an ultimate different meaning of the written content and that is how one thought is manipulated into many others simultaneously.
I firmly believe in the existence of Almighty and that is evidently seen in my work repeatedly. I have been blogging since 2 years through different websites and have been a freelance writer too for a short period of time in the past. (for an experience only) I consider this world to be a transitory abode and us to be the pilgrims, where our souls are sustaining the suffocation and awaiting the call for freedom! Everything is sacred in its own way, depends on the perception from person to person.
THE GLOBAL UNISON! It conveys the message of my heart. The message of the ever green souls rekindled and thriving to attain the ecstasy in unity. This is a NEW AGE OF PERFECTION! The imperfect PERFECTION where efforts help you to join hands and spread the word of unity, where your flaws make you happy and you welcome the corrections with a broad smile. This is my WORLD! A world that can be presented with Morality, Humanity, Unity and Philosophy.
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Hmmm .. Waiting for next part!
I hope to not let you down with the second part!!
-Naima.
I know you won’t and never
You are so awesome to say that
-Naima.
it was nice and touching.. don’t know if I’m wrong, but I find autobiographical touch in your love-breakup poems. And, if at all I’m right, I wish everything gets well, for you
or, as you say, your so-called “friend” 
Autobiographical touch.. (lol) Really??
That girl was actually not my friend, I was just a listener and I tried to console her after listening her sad story
-Naima.
YES, REALLY
Oh so she was not even your friend, and you wrote a poem for her
That’s really nice of you!
Hahaha
Am I not too amazing to write a poem for a girl who was just a story-teller? I felt the story and wrote a poem for myself! I always enjoy writing non-fiction than fiction (my imagination sucks at times)
I can right a poem for your restless nights too (lol)
-Naima.
Oh yeah you’re truly amazing
Good job! Post the part 2 soon.
I too sail in the same boat at times. I love writing poems as a ‘role-play’.
Oh sure, you should go ahead and amaze me this time
I will be posting Part II soon – may be tonight!
I am going to amaze you; don’t worry
-Naima.
Okay will check it out.
I’ll look forward to it, then!
Sure, it would be humor though.. lol
-Naima.
Oh yes you made me laugh that day too
Bring it on!
I know I know.. I can be a good joker at times!!
-Naima.
And, that is a real tough job Naima. So kudos to you
You are adorably sweet to compliment me.
-Naima.
Beautiful… !!! Brought tears to my eyes… reminded me about my accident I met few months back.
Ummm.. I know what you mean by that. This is what we call *LIFE*
-Naima.
ya right. :-/
You can smile, sweetheart – like this
-Naima.
thank you
You’re always welcome, love
-Naima.
I’m glad to read this awesome stuff again!
Rahul
Hahaha
I know it was your favorite
-Naima.
Yeah! Of course.
Rahul
Oh, so emotional and well written. Cannot wait to hear more. You talented girl you!!!!!
Awwww.. you are an amazing appreciator! Love you loads for your compliments!
-Naima.
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It would be nice to read during heart broken time
but not during good mood 
Then just give it a kick and move on, sweets!
Wait for the bad mood to take over (lol)
-Naima.
Waiting for someone who is ready to get kick from me!!!
Hahaha
I fear if it is just ME! (lol)
-Naima.
Maybe a pillow
not you (lol)
Oh, I am safe! (lol)
-Naima.
Even am safe too..lol
You always were [lol]
-Naima.
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the sense of loss moved throughout here, but that last line was absolutely spectacular naima:))
You’ve been such a great encouragement throughout. I owe you for that [smiling]
-Naima.
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