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Save ME!

Fingers entwined,
Love is BLIND.

Β Wandered across each pane of my mind,
Seeking for the beat of my heart’s kind.
Hindrance in the way, my soul uncombined,
Persuading me to follow my dreams like a BLIND.

One touch of your hand melts me away,
Broken heart gets mended for a day.
The ray of hope, that prevails and stay,
Illuminating my soul, strengthening my way.

Love and affection is all I need,
To gather the broken pieces buried underneath.
Gloomy path down, I may mislead,
Thou presence could glorify the way – no one pays HEED.

Would you mind giving your hand in MINE?
Desperate of its warmth but NO SIGN.
Give me a jerk – tell me everything is fine,
Rescue my soul, let it pursue thou SHINE!

55 responses to “Save ME!

  1. Beautiful :)!!! Great to have you back!!!

  2. Mira Jay

    nice flow…perhaps it’s our downfall; the ever-need for a caring hand in ours:(
    Much love

  3. Hmm hmm! An enthusiastic piece.\m/ πŸ™‚
    I’m really happy to see you back gal. πŸ™‚

  4. soumyav

    Very beautiful dear! the feelings touch each one of us..

  5. Splendidly beautiful!

  6. Wow. I really love it! Happy Reading!

  7. not only romantic but a very healing piece. very well liked this one dear.

  8. enjoy this immensely as to the hand of the muse and is two-fold as i see it. last stanza tells me that the hand of the muse must give one a jerk to keep the flow of the word running out of the soul.

  9. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words ⋅

    oh I really lie this one..!
    you are very gifted in writing from hearts emotion…
    Beautiful…glad you are back…
    Take Care…

  10. onlinefunland ⋅

    Reblogged this on onlinefunland and commented:

  11. touches the deepest place of heart. very beautiful naima.

  12. warmth and kindness, you will get all as you yourself distrubute these and more without mind and kind (???) did I sound wague, ?

    • I am so obliged to have you visit my site when you yourself are an embodiment of wisdom on the planet.
      You absolutely didn’t sound vague, you were crystal clear in conveying your message and thank you so very much for the compliment Sir .
      Warm Regards,

  13. so very beautiful naima, full of yearning and love. a love that should be reciprocated.

  14. ))sniff, sniff(( this is beautifully sad πŸ™‚

  15. Thanks for stopping by my blog!

  16. artzent

    This post is awesome! What a story about uplifting determination. Thank you! and thank you for your vote on my recent post. You will be counted!

    • I love your blog and like reading it. You are beautiful writer yourself love πŸ™‚
      Thank you for your comment in here and thank you for enjoying the post, I am always humbled to have your likes and comments!
      With much love,

  17. revenge

    yo good blog dude, i think u hav put your point across superbly cheers

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