Wandered across each pane of my mind,
Seeking for the beat of my heart’s kind.
Hindrance in the way, my soul uncombined,
Persuading me to follow my dreams like a BLIND.
One touch of your hand melts me away,
Broken heart gets mended for a day.
The ray of hope, that prevails and stay,
Illuminating my soul, strengthening my way.
Love and affection is all I need,
To gather the broken pieces buried underneath.
Gloomy path down, I may mislead,
Thou presence could glorify the way – no one pays HEED.
Would you mind giving your hand in MINE?
Desperate of its warmth but NO SIGN.
Give me a jerk – tell me everything is fine,
Rescue my soul, let it pursue thou SHINE!
Beautiful :)!!! Great to have you back!!!
Thank you for liking it 🙂
Yeah, I needed to bring on MYSELF with the my flavor 😉
nice flow…perhaps it’s our downfall; the ever-need for a caring hand in ours:(
True! One day or the other – the hand is right tangled with ours 🙂
Love to you too,
Hmm hmm! An enthusiastic piece.\m/ 🙂
I’m really happy to see you back gal. 🙂
And I am still over-whelmed with that post “The Survival Of Glint”, ya made me feel so special yesterday Rahul, thank you too much!
Haha! That was a warm welcome to you by EVERYONE in our world gal. 🙂 🙂
No need any formality tags here. I just need to see you always in a gaiety way. 🙂
Have a great day ahead. Cheers bud.\m/ 😀
Thank you so much, even this THANK YOU sounds like a dumb ass in front of your efforts for me. Love you infinite for that 🙂
LOL! I didn’t put enough effort for that post Naima.
SERIOUSLY TELLING YOU. 🙂 🙂
Love to you too.
Hahahaha. Of course, ya didn’t have to. After all who were you writing about 😉
Yeah yeah! She is my best buddy in this blogging world know? 😀 😀
NO FURTHER MENTIONS PLEASE! 😀 😉
Hahaha, Certainly she is!
Whenever ya seek her support, ya will find her right behind your shoulder 🙂
Haha…! I don’t need your kinda talk outs about her gal. I knew her well in most of the aspects it seems. She did proved that a number of times, how far she understands and supports me though. That’s my buddy gal, Naima.\m/ \m/
Awwww.. Now don’t make me cry!!! :”)
Huh? For what? She won’t cry! Simply crying without any specific reason wouldn’t suits her according to me. That too a fact about her, which you mayn’t be knowing. 😀 🙂
Wow! Seems like you know her better than ME 😉
Yeah yeah! That’s what the specialty of friendship we own. This is Rahul and Naima. No need of any OUTSIDERS like you in between them. 😀 😛
Damn! You just bolted me with your argument! You guys win! I am out! 😉
You are ALREADY out gal! Gehahahah…. 😀 😀
Just told all these facts about us to you. 🙂 🙂
I must explain know?? 😉 😛
Very beautiful dear! the feelings touch each one of us..
Thank you! I am glad you found the dug down feelings 🙂
Thank you Celeste 🙂
Wow. I really love it! Happy Reading!
Thank you so much 🙂
I just have a weakness for poetry especially. Keep up the great reads. Happy Reading!
Thank you once again 🙂
not only romantic but a very healing piece. very well liked this one dear.
Thank you Len, I am glad you liked it 🙂
enjoy this immensely as to the hand of the muse and is two-fold as i see it. last stanza tells me that the hand of the muse must give one a jerk to keep the flow of the word running out of the soul.
Thank you so much Donald, I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
oh I really lie this one..!
you are very gifted in writing from hearts emotion…
Beautiful…glad you are back…
Thank you Maryrose, I am glad you enjoyed the lines.
This comment reflects your sweetness 🙂
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Thank you for sharing 🙂
You know how beautifully you wrote it 😀
Thank you so much once again 🙂
Welcome – Its Very Nice
touches the deepest place of heart. very beautiful naima.
Thank you so much Sharmishta 🙂
Love to you ;
Thank you so much Balu 🙂
warmth and kindness, you will get all as you yourself distrubute these and more without mind and kind (???) did I sound wague, ?
I am so obliged to have you visit my site when you yourself are an embodiment of wisdom on the planet.
You absolutely didn’t sound vague, you were crystal clear in conveying your message and thank you so very much for the compliment Sir .
so very beautiful naima, full of yearning and love. a love that should be reciprocated.
Thank you as always dear 🙂
Your comments always makes my day brighter !
so do yours. 🙂
))sniff, sniff(( this is beautifully sad 🙂
Awwww… Thank you for reading and commenting sweetheart! Love you loads ❤
Thanks for stopping by my blog!
It was a great adventure! I hope to visit it soon 🙂
This post is awesome! What a story about uplifting determination. Thank you! and thank you for your vote on my recent post. You will be counted!
I love your blog and like reading it. You are beautiful writer yourself love 🙂
Thank you for your comment in here and thank you for enjoying the post, I am always humbled to have your likes and comments!
With much love,
yo good blog dude, i think u hav put your point across superbly cheers
Thank you 🙂