Flight of a bird high in the sky;
I wish for the wings to vigorously fly.
The hands of the clock moving back and forth submissively;
I wish for the time to be my subservient slave decisively
The voyage of sea exploring the world of sharks and whales;
I wish for the gills to swim unless the exhaustion trails.
Gleaming stars shimmering far above;
I wish for their radiance as flawless as dove.
Lions roar, wolves howl and birds sing;
I wish for the ears to comprehend their ping.
The speed of light – incredible and flawless;
I wish for the journey at the equivalent pace lawless.
I wish I wish I wish; what is this?
Isn’t CONTENTMENT the sole weapon for lasting bliss?
Humans are forged souls upgrading their wish lists;
Slaves of destiny thumped by their malicious analysis.
I really like this
Thank you so much sweetheart 🙂
It was in “SPAM” – I guess WORD-PRESS is envying you nowadays 😉
Love,
-Naima.
You just get better and better this was very powerful and flowed extremely well loved it!
Thank you so much Len, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Love,
-Naima.
As always good.
Thank you Alex 🙂
-Naima.
Loved the logic and power inside
Thank you David, I am always pleased to see your comment.
-Naima.
This poem is awesome. You just get better ans better. Bravo!
Thank you artzent, I am so overjoyed reading your comment.
Love,
-Naima.
A beautiful enchanting writing my friend
The flow of words were magical in imagery
Aussie Emu
Thank you Aussie, I am glad you enjoyed it.
Blessings,
-Naima.
I wish for your success in aptitude tests!
I wish for your career and I wish for your everything!
Good Luck Naima 🙂
PS:Nice post..I liked it a lot
With Love
Sathya
Thank you Sathya, the test was super awesome!! Thanks to you for the prayers!!
-Naima.
wow…So nice Naima! 🙂
You will get Grades in this test too 🙂
Its my pleasure Naima!!
-Sathya
Thank you so much dear 🙂
-Naima.
Its my pleasure dear 🙂
Hmm now take rest and prepare for Tomorrow test!
-Sathya
It is almost the same, nothing different! 🙂
Thank you any way.
-Naima.
Haha..that’s Right!! 😀
Love
Sathya
I love your writing 🙂
xx
Thank you sweetheart, I love yours too 🙂
With much love,
-Naima.
Gleaming words of naima on the blog above
Her followers comments flows like a river far below 😀
See…reading your blog makes me a poet too 😉
Nice naima!
Awwww B, I always appreciate your visits! I love to have you commenting, you are special after all 😉
Oh yeah, everyone can be a poet with a bit of influence, I am glad in your case, IT WAS MINE 😉
Thank you very much B!
Much Love,
-Naima.
I still wish upon a star if it’s the first I see 🙂
Awww Jensine 🙂
That is adorably cute!
-Naima.
I know I am a kid at heart
That makes you even more beautiful 🙂
-Naima.
ah thanks 🙂
You’re always welcome lovely 🙂
-Naima.
May the god almighty full fill your whole WISHES as mentioned above in REAL LIFE. Have a good time ahead. God bless.
Thanks,
Rahul
Same applies for you. God Bless you too.
Much love,
-Naima.
🙂 🙂
Beautifully wistful with a punchy end! Lovely 🙂
Thank you Alex 🙂
Love you loads ❤
-Naima.
Your “about” is lovely, Naima, and may God Bless you in all you do! I look forward to reading more~
Lauren
Thank you so much Lauren, your site is as beautiful as anything itself 🙂
Much love,
-Naima.
Thanks, Naima, and I meant to add that your poem was just beautiful! I thought I was following you already, but I am now! Hugs, Lauren 🙂
Thank you, you are as lovely as your poetry. You have been a great inspiration throughout whenever I read you.
Much love,
-Naima.
Aww..thanks, Naima, that is very nice to hear and I’ve already been inspired by you, too! xx
Thank you so much. It is all about your generosity and greatness Lauren 🙂
-Naima.
So much kindness on a sunny Sunday afternoon. Naima, you’re spoiling me, but I thank you and I hope I can live up to these words, for at least a few days! 🙂
I am sure even after spoiling up, your poetry will be as magical as it is forever.
Love,
-Naima.
🙂
Ok this is truly one of my favorite poems of all time. Such talent you possess! Keep it up girl, you have a gift and I am so thankful you share (me and hundreds of others 🙂 )
I love your line “Lions roar, wolves howl and birds sing; I wish for the ears to comprehend their ping” as well as the line following, about the speed of light. Indeed Naima, this is incredible.
Love and hugs,
Gina
Awww… Thank you so much Gina, I am glad you enjoyed it.
I am sure, ya will enjoy my other post too, it is specifically a dedication to you 🙂
Much love,
-Naima.
Very nice !
Thank you dear Zygerina 🙂
Much love,
-Naima.
Brilliant, my friend….so blissful, but love the ‘thump’ of reality in the end…..well done!
Celeste
Thank you – I believe “Dream realistically” 😉
Much love,
-Naima.
Beautiful work Naima.
Thank you Kim 🙂
Love,
-Naima.
Awesome! I especially loved the last two lines. Wow, you’re good
Thank you! Your site is awesome too! Will be following 🙂
Much love,
-Naima.
Thanks 🙂
If we can remember what we can imagine, and what we experience instantly becomes a memory… with a strong enough imagination, could it be just the same as remembering an experience? But it still wouldn’t be the same because it was only internal. I somehow got unsubscribed to you for awhile and could not open your blog, glad it is open for me to explore again! You have a gift of versatile perception.
I am glad you are back with your wisdom and even more glad to have you sharing your insight. I am always honored to have you appreciating me and my site 🙂
Much love,
-Naima.
Beautiful poem! 🙂
Thank you lovely 🙂
-Naima.