Cry until happiness embraces the swollen eyes
The reflection unseen,
Craving a cup of caffeine.
Red swollen face and the rolling tears,
To tug the outburst within revealing fears.
The dark starry night thus so long,
Rumbling words tuning into a rhymed song.
The alcohol defy to tempt insanity,
The roller coaster of life betrays humanity.
My body’s numb and strength fatal,
Love rescues my conscience unstable.
Panic strangles the mystery,
Tear drops narrate their history.
The hasty breaths release the firm grip,
The grievous setback attempts to make a flip.
The calmness pleads the hustle bustle to take control,
Happiness forgives sorrow for its vicious role.
Endurance of tear drops uphold a smile,
The enchanting air heals the wounds in a while.
globalunison 
awesome post ….very vivid …
Thank you so much Tim. I am glad you liked it. Congratulations for your multiple victories I have been going through, you deserve it all 🙂
Blessings,
-Naima.
Thanks Naima … 😀
You’re always welcome Tim 🙂
-Naima.
A very poignant poetry, evocative and well written flowing words. Good shot, Naima.
Thank you so much! You enlighten my heart with your humble comment 🙂
Love,
-Naima.
Lots of metaphor, deep and and elusive.
Thank you Alex as always!!!
-Naima.
Very Good!
I enjoyed it very much!
Take Care…
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ladybluerose
Thank you so much Mary! I am glad you enjoyed it.
You take care too.
-Naima.
😥 -> 🙂
Okay, whatever I perceived…. I can just say Thank you B 😉
-Naima.
There is a lot of truth in this poem to be heard…..I actually wrote a poem similar to this a while back called ‘smile through the tears’….
I like where you were in your mind and what you were striving to say here…. very good lady!
kisses and hugs
Celeste
Firstly, WHERE IS YOUR VERSION! I hope I can get a link here if its on blog or anywhere? I so want to read it coming from you!!
Anyway, thank you so much for liking it!!!
Hugs and kisses right back,
-Naima.
http://celestealluvial.wordpress.com/2012/03/16/smile-through-the-tears/
xoxoxo
Thank youuuu ❤
-Naima.
You are welcome my lovely lady friend…. 😉
Indeed, poetry is a skill and and an art. It is beautiful!
Thank you so much Amie, I love your blog much more!!
Love,
-Naima.
Your gift is amazing, Naima. Keep it up!
Love love,
Amie
More love right back to you ❤
-Naima.
Impressive image, Naima! Wow!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much Amie darling!! I feel much more good to know you as a part of Word Press family!
-Naima.
Yay, me too love- me too!
-Amie
You have a deep talent in writing! 🙂
Thank you Juan 🙂
I am glad you enjoyed it.
-Naima.
“Her words are flying like a relishing fledged bird! :)”
Great post buddy.\m/ 🙂
-Rahul
Thank you Rahul!! I am glad you enjoyed it!!
Much love,
-Naima.
WOW! I opened up your blog and there was this big EYE staring out me. That’s what makes blogging so much fun. There are so many different ideas and different way to present them.
Thanks for stopping by my Mix&Match. I don’t have a central theme. It’s more fun visiting people and then thinking……I think I would like to talk about their idea too.
I dabble in Inkscape and Gimp. Have fun with your creations.
meme
Hey Meme!! Your website was so much fun to visit, I forgot to press the follow button.. LOL. I will do just now!!!
Much love,
-Naima.
One good follow deserves another.
Aww.. you are adorable 🙂
-Naima.
That eye is totally awesome. It sure get your attention and your blog post is well beyond your years. what a gift!
Thank you Artzent. I am always cheered when the encouragement comes from you.
-Naima.
lovely one naima.
Thank you so much sweetheart!
Hugs,
-Naima.
Well said. I enjoyed it. Cheers. 🙂
Thank you for dropping by Ron! Hope to see you around soon .
-Naima
You’re welcome, 🙂
Love your poetry and wrote a piece of music to go with your Tear Drops. Listen https://soundcloud.com/dwpmusic/tear-drops
How would feel if I combined your poetry and my music into a tone poem and posted it on YoutTube complete with the artwork accompanying your poem?
In any event great job.
Thank you for the tone poem, Daniel. I heard it on sound cloud and it was beautiful.
Thank you for sharing it with me.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
Naima, I was thinking about combining your poem and my music along with the picture associated with your poem to make a YouTube video – a tone poem. I would not make it public until you approved it. Would you be interested in that?
Daniel