Passion – a dominating force.
The sole path escorting through Eternity
Sorrow or bliss credits the global Fraternity
Life’s a cheese cake; yet intricate to enjoy
Beating eggs, whisking flour and freaking sounds annoy
Love cradles my soul; suffering cuddles me
Is there any way out- any pending fee?
I swallow my breath collapsing in the soil
Inviting death after the long-termed toil
My soul enthralls my presence on this transitory abode
Passwords encrypted yet the accomplishments to decode
Passion to survive binds me training for the perilous flight
I crossed the stony beds, thorny deserts and mighty oceans; alas! My bare sight!
Blood implies the ending of my expedition
I lay back saddling my soul with the fire of ambition
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Fantastic!
Thank you.
-Naima.
Reminds of that scene from Sgt York movie, Gary Cooper where he spends the night on the mountain meditating whether to allow himself to be drafted WW I.
Wow!! You really reminded me of that scene!! I never thought of that on my own!! Thank you for such a contribution – you really greased my slow-paced memory. Lol.
Blessings,
-Naima.
Very nice. You are a passionate writer!
Thank you B! And you are a passionate reader [Wink]
-Naima.
You capture the essence of “passion” in your words and image beautifully.
And your gravatar is even more alluring, Alex!! [Winks]
Thank you anyway!
-Naima.
you clearly took a quick trip to my soul… passion rocks! 🙂
super awesome post!
YOU CAN’T JUST BE 17, honey… you have got to be kidding me… your soul is too old for your age… 🙂 you rock!
Hahahaha 😀
Lets plan a personal meeting, I will explain you the TOP SECRET sweetheart 😉
-Naima.
TOP SECRET… lol… lets meet… in the physical or … beyond? hahahaha… my friends don’t get that.. 🙂
Hahahahaha 😀
You are too sexy sweetheart :*
-Naima.
your wisdom is sexier! 🙂
Gosh! Stop making me blush! :p
-Naima.
Thank you sweetheart! Your Facebook statuses are just so naughty, got an inspiration from there 😉
-Naima.
I got as far as “life is a cheese cake” and couldn’t stop laughing. Every cheese cake I have made has been one big flop. The graham cracker crust crumbles and the cheesy part sags in the middle. The guests leave most of it on the plate.
Oh, please tell me my life won’t be so.
Again thanks for all of your nice comments on my blog. Are you sure you really want me over here commenting?
More Fun!
I simply adore you and your beautiful soul that adds color to my life as well as blog site, hence I want you forever commenting !!! I love having fun with you, reading your blog and enjoying it!!
The best part about your comments is YOUR EXPERIENCES that you share with me, just like you shared the cheese caked one and I wonder how creative lady you are. especially your memory is commendable at such an age!! I love to have a word with you!!
You are adorable in your own ways, lovely!!
Much love,
-Naima.
passion makes life worth living. amazing poem and fabulous pic naimal.
Thank you so much lovely ❤
-Naima.
Very handsomely Written !
Thank you so much 🙂
-Naima.
Beautifully written poem Naima. My favorite line is- “Passwords encrypted yet the accomplishments to decode”. Great work.
Thank you Arindam for dropping by and reading!!
Blessings,
-Naima.
A fine passionate poem, Naima.
Thank you [Smiles]
-Naima.
Elegant writing as usual, Naima. Thanks!
Thank you so much for liking it! I am always honored to receive a feedback from you!
Much love,
-Naima.
You’re most welcome Naima, my friend! Cheers.
W….O…..W!!!!!! This was amazing…..love the impact and the way you chose your words…..I had to read it a second time…..tremendous job!
love ya….
Celeste
xoxo
Thank you so much sweetheart! This is one of the most random poems I have ever written! It was more over scribbling on a rough sheet of paper while I was waiting on my guests to leave my place and give me some time alone! Lol
Love to you too,
-Naima.
A ha! A true poet can use any situation to their advantage, take a seemingly ordinary moment and build on it to make it extraordinary…..you are an interesting young woman, Naima…..blessings, my friend….
xoxo
I might be interesting but not as much as you, gorgeous!! 😉
Love,
-Naima.
lol….not true!!!!!!Sweetie!
Hey, just wanted you to know that I posted part 8 of the story yesterday, and a song for the story this morning…..a couple folks tell me they are not getting email notifications when I post….so when you pop over later to read, let me know if you are one of the ones not getting them, OK? Thanks my sweet darling and hugs and kisses to you…..
xoxoxoxoxo
Oh my gosh!! yes, I didn’t receive it!! I will just check it!! damn!! I can not afford to miss it! Thank you for informing!!
Love,
-Naima.