When I realized – it was too late!
Tears of blood, predicting a flood;
Worn out soul, screeching in mud.
Splendid mornings turn out to rust;
Where shedding tears is considered must.
Sparkling eyes chasing crystals in the sky;
Thou each gaze pulls me strongly, making a way to die.
Strings of emotion tuned to deviate and devastate;
Crumbled heart seeking the happiness over-delayed.
The beauty of my soul vanishes away;
Thou enchant a spell to stand out in the breaking day.
Abhorring the wounds, all over the heart;
Surrendering to the agony, caused by the poisoned dart.
Thou snatched my life, scorned the blissful smile;
Blessing with the everlasting pain, in thee own style.
World around me perishes as thee left me forlorn;
Sweet smells bitter, flowers turn into painful thorns.
Invisible thee, but apparent to me;
Seeking thou in Eden, finding the glee.
globalunison 
Whats wrong? I hate to put like here because I don’t like the way this sounds. What is going on? Can I help you?
Ahhh. Nothing is wrong, sweetheart! I love you for your concern! I know this sound very low and there is a reason behind it. Few weeks back, I heard my friend got divorced due to some problems; I think both of them were responsible partly as they couldn’t not decide to compromise and take such a fierce and unhappy decision when she was pregnant with his baby! She plans to give birth to the baby but they have destroyed the family already! The kid in this world would not be happy seeing his parents apart!
I wrote this poem feeling the excruciating pain and hence I shared it today!
Once again, thank you for your concern!
Much love to you and hugs,
-Naima.
Well, you certainly gave your feelings voice! So glad that you are ok, and so sorry about your friend. Sometimes sorrow can result in a creative burst like this. Your poem is very powerful!
Your concern and care moved me, love you so much for that artzent! Thank you for always being there!!
Hugs,
-Naima.
I think it is important that we have an image of ourselves not contingent on people, places or things and not amended by what people do or don’t do.
You are certainly right to an extent Sir but if we have a broader point of view – the things, places, people and situations all are interrelated that helps us develop our very own picture in the society!
We many not take in consideration their perspectives regarding us but at times this is one necessary factor to build up the self esteem!!
Thank you for the contribution!
Blessings,
-Naima.
Abhorring the wounds, all over the heart;
Surrendering to the agony, caused by the poisoned dart.
It is agony true and true a beautiful yet sad and heartfelt write. Very very good 🙂
Thank you Len, it is heart felt! Comes directly from the bottom of the heart!!
-Naima.
Awesome !
Thank you “Land Of Fun” – your comments lift my heart to cloud nine! [Smiles]
-Naima.
Most Welcome My Talented Friend 😀
Your website makes me laugh like crazies so THANK YOU!
Much love,
-Naima.
Its a so much valuable compliment dear !it would be really an honor for me if you write something for my blog,when you free time:D
Hahaha 😀
Sure, anytime! What would you want me to write for your site??
-Naima.
A sweet poem, or anything you like
Sure, anything for you, dear friend 🙂
-Naima.
Thanks:D
My pleasure as always 🙂
-Naima.
very moving and strong. 🙂 Blessings, Barbara
Awww Barbara! Thank you so much sweetheart!!
Blessings to you too!
-Naima.
A highly emotional share from a gal, that expels under the wounds of some perishing schedules, eh?
. What you have conveyed through this strip touched my INSIGHTS deeply Naima. Thanks for this thought provoking simple poetry! 🙂
-Rahul
Hmmmm.. The feelings are simple yet complicated!
Thank you for your humble comment!
-Naima.
My pleasure as always. 🙂
It’ll be better if I say that, this gal has got much excellence in sharing her gleams of amazing catchy thoughts and feelings.\m/ 🙂
-Rahul
Don’t make me go BLUSHING always!! Have some mercy o my cheeks too!!
How are you by the way?? fever down now??
-Naima.
No no no! You don’t have the right to tell that towards me buddy gal.
*Oppositions against this sort of facts from me is STRICTLY RESTRICTED for YOU*
Please do make convenient adjustments in those aspects ONLY if YOU can. LOL. 😀 😉 🙂
I’m feeling good now dear. Didn’t went to college today. Was at home itself taking medicines, watching some movies and all. As I told you in Ambiguous Words, this fever serves me to know in detail about an awesome minded lady doctor. Will surely tell you about her via a surprise post. 🙂 🙂 How about your vacation days? Results came, uh?
-Rahul
We all want our lives to be good and trouble free. We want it even more for our friends.
Many times we can do something for our friends…..provide food, clothing and shelter.
But the emotional help is so much harder. Sometimes words are the best we can give. But not just any words. The choice and arrangement are so important. You certainly know how to choose and arrange.
I am sure you can give comfort to your friend with your wonderful words.
I hope I can give comfort to her! It is basically that her pregnancy is giving her a hard time with the divorce! I hope they are fine!!!
Thank you for such a kind and humble comment!
Love,
-Naima.
I feel sorry for your friend and I’m touched by your concern for them.
Awww B!! I knew ya would pop in up to comment!
Well, I feel sorry for her too!! May Almighty bless her!
-Naima.
Thanks.
Beautifully Sad.. Your words move, and reach deep.
Thank you Clint! I loved your blog!!
Blessings,
-Naima.
Hi! I have just nominated you for a Very Inspiring Blogger Award
http://cristimoise.wordpress.com/2012/07/31/very-inspiring-blogger-award/
I would be honoured if you accept!
Thank you so much Cristi! I am honored!
Blessings,
-Naima.
My pleasure Naima.You deserved it.Thank you for your support !
You’re always welcome 🙂
-Naima.
This is devastatingly beautiful! Have I told you that before? If I have, it is because you are so brilliant at writing profound emotion that brings the reader to a screeching halt…..if this is true, this makes me want to punch something for your hurt heart….I want names and numbers! If not, carry on with the earth shattering tone and beauty of your words…. :)….very well done, my friend….
lots of love
Celeste
You are one of the most amazing soul I have ever come across, have I ever told you THAT?? 😉
Thank you so much for your encouragement!!
Hugs,
-Naima.
Not sure if you feel that way ? but when I write my poetry I do write with my feelings, inner hatred or even happiness, its all penned down in words, Hope you are feeling good ! cheers
Regards
isaac976
Yeah, you are right.. It seems as if everything is on the paper and ya can breath now as a huge burden has been moved!!
Thank you for your kind comment!!
-Naima.
no worries Naima, if you have twitter do follow me, @isaac976 that’s where I am always .. 🙂
Cheers
Isaac
Hahaha 😀
I do not have twitter hence I intend on making one!! Then I will definitely follow!
-Naima.
Remember I told you that I write poems according to my feelings? well this is one of em, may be amateurish for your standards but do check it out.
http://isaacloo.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/poem-for-my-best-friend-and-long-life-mate/
-Isaac
I surely will instead I am already! Thank you for the link, dear.
-Naima.
Ouch! Bravo!! Lovely poem –
Sparkling eyes chasing crystals in the sky;
Thou each gaze pulls me strongly, making a way to die.
beautiful lines 🙂
Thank you Windyyy!! Love you loads!!
Hugs,
-Naima.
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