Do you remember?
That boy from the mountains,
Where the dead-cold December,
And the freezing fountains,
Lived up to sway passionately.
The moment I saw him,
Butterflies attacked my belly,
My heart bleeped on a whim,
I melted like a jelly,
My lashes began to flutter,
As the rain drops drenched my face,
I rhythmically began to utter,
The love song rejoicing our dreamlike embrace,
His glimpse made my heart stutter,
As we lived up to sway passionately.
He was talking to his guy friends,
Smiling and laughing as his dimples sank,
Deep within his cheeks as I saw their ends,
Alas! What a beauty, my heart bowed to thank,
Could I touch him with my eyes?
Didn’t he observe me watching him?
Chills run down my spine as he tried,
To look at me with the corners of his eyes,
I turned around and smiled to myself,
As we lived up to sway passionately.
I turned back to find nobody in his place,
I cursed myself for moving my eye off his face,
I couldn’t let go off him – I need to chase,
My trembling heart began to race,
Racing heart couldn’t get back to its pace,
Just then I felt a sensational embrace,
Somebody tracing my arms from behind in-case,
I turned around and his smile shining down with grace,
His gleaming eyes requested for a dancing phase,
As we lived up to sway passionately.
The dance floor so welcoming yet,
All I could see was only him I bet,
He pulled me closer while I began to sweat,
Shoving off the anxiety – we were ready to set,
For a flight on his private jet,
A flight to the love land where I threat,
If biting on a poisonous apple would be my regret,
I didn’t let go off him as he gripped me tight,
Didn’t worry to have a poisonous bite,
My mighty strength announced him my personal knight,
I kissed him right and he made me fight,
To hug him tight and hold his sight,
As we lived up to sway passionately.
He bowed his head,
As his heart bled,
For our union in bed,
But I could not be misled,
By the crocodile tears he shed,
So I took a thread,
And tied it on his wrist until red,
He gave me the look of dread,
But I smiled as he fled,
To another land,
With another sexy damsel,
For another grand celebration on the stand,
As they lived up to sway passionately.
Very nice Naima…
Thank you 🙂
-Naima.
Loved the way you painted your stirred emotions…
Peace & Light
Thank you for dropping by and loving it.
I am glad you enjoyed.
Peace.
-Naima.
Hmm hmm! Someone is becoming SERIOUSLY romantic. 😀 😉
The capability for spreading the emotions are simply GLITTERING through your prior words, Naima. \m/ 🙂
Rahul
Hahaha 😀
I was being romantic on a purpose!! It was a challenge for me to write this type of poetry, hence I just tried and I am still not sure whether I succeeded or not.
Thank you so much for the encouragement as always, Rahul!!
With love and blessings,
-Naima.
From my point of views, you have SUCCEEDED in expressing romantic poetry skills, Naima! 🙂
Rahul
Hahahaha 😀
Thank you thank you!
-Naima.
global, nice but women do not sweat, they perspire and ladies do not perspire, they glow. CS
I can figure out what a great flirt ya would have made in your young-age, sweetheart 😉
Love,
-Naima.
Yasss, yasss, us old coots were quite the hot flames back when buggies were in fashion!
YPF,
CS
Hahaha 😀
Do you know, I still love you *LOADS* no matter whatever is in fashion 😉
YPF ❤
-Naima.
Sometime it hurts, sometime in joy, but upon all, trust is so important. Love does not mean sacrifice, as there is no such word when two people are really in love. It is a shame if someone left a relationship because of lack of trust, and lack of confidence to live with each other. I looked into the dictionary for some words in order to understand the poem :). I feel that it is different from your previous writing. That is a good surprise.
KC
Heya,
I hope ya are done with digesting my poetry for today, LOL.
Anyway, I agree to what ya say all about love and relationship. As far as talking about how this poem is different from others, this is again a mystery to me. My friend who is a blogger as well as a loyal reader to my site asked me to write a romantic poetry. It was moreover a challenge as I had never done it before specifically. I was going good until the last stanza! I don’t know why I included the last stanza but it came by itself and I couldn’t think of not including it after I was done writing, I tried to replace it with some other words while posting over here too but I was helpless with words!Hence, I think I disappointed my friend too with the last stanza but all I could say is it wasn’t intentional – at times you just can’t control the harness of words even if you want to.
Thank you for always sparing the time to comment! You are just too awesome =)
With love,
-Naima.
The good thing and the different is that you follow your heart, and you start to write your own story, and not someone’s story.
I used to write my own story too, but with someone’s words.
Then comes another thing in writing, I like to cut and paste news on a book when I was in my secondary school, and I read a story about Hemingway. He was a boxer too, and a journalist. Do you know there is anything in common in these two career?
You should look it up and you will know why =), I stop here for your research.
with love too =)
kc
Okay, you left me with a good name “Hemingway” and I read about him. I think I need to read one of his book now, I am tempting it (lol – ignore my stupidity)
To be very honest, I tried to search up on similarity between boxing and journalism but I couldn’t come up with anything but just some of my brain interpretations. I think the common difference between them is that they both are accountable to their people. You make me think and I like it.
Have a very good night with a smile 🙂
-Naima.
http://suite101.com/article/creative-genius-a34003
http://www.copyblogger.com/ernest-hemingway-top-5-tips-for-writing-well/
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iceberg_Theory
I have vaguely the memory because the I read the short article about Hemingway, that was a very long time ago. I tried to find it in the internet to refresh my memory, but not too much could I find. Here I make my attempt to remember, and to explain.
In the ring of boxing, there is no way we can have flowery movement (i.e. analogy to beautiful adjectives in writing), and every punch we give, must be accurate, and killing, but with the energy to reserve to defence, and to move in the attack in a very swift time. The boxer could not afford to have wasting their energy, every attack in between, is with uttermost careful in plotting, and in preparation of the next attack. This is also his style in writing news, and later the novel.
I hope that is the correct interpretation.
Good night to you too
kc
Ummm.. I kind understood it and kinda have to use my own brains!! Lol.
Will be following up to the link. See you.
-Naima.
i enjoyed this. was sad when it wasn’t meant to be. i hope that she “lived up to sway passionately” as well. 😉
We all live up to sway passionately and so will she 😉
I do not know why I made it sad but I am glad to hear that you enjoyed it.
-Naima.
I’ve nominated you for the One Lovely Blog Award! Check out the link here:
http://tahanishihab.com/2012/09/15/one-lovely-blog-award-nomination-a-prelude-to-a-lovely-day/
Thank you so much and Congratulations!!
Love,
-Naima.
Awwwww…..:)
Love love love…
So beautiful..
Kudos, my lady.
You have captured my heart… —-
Awwww.. Thank you so much for liking it. I am glad you enjoyed! Though I have no idea what made me write such a twisted ending!
-Naima.
you set this up nicely. all that romance and then it took a turn at the end. i wasn’t expecting that. hope all is going well. england soon, right?
Hahaha 😀
I wasn’t expecting it myself! Lol. Yeah. soon enough 🙂
Hope everything is well with you.
-Naima.
Nice!!! The perfect poem for teens 🙂
Oh yeah, so perfect that I am sure we all(teens) doesn’t have to fall for the looks of our infatuations!! 🙂
-Naima.
Maybe one can fall for the inner looks not the external one which will lead into trouble 🙂
How can that lead into trouble – I think you messed up! One can fall for the external looks and that can lead into trouble, isn’t it??
-Naima.
PS– Again *SPAMMED* – I am hating Word-Press! :S
It’s quite hard to tell. I have seen some of my friends who are externally(appearance) good but internally(Heart) very bad. Life is mixed of good and bad.
Yeah, I know! I don’t believe in a good appearance with a heart of an evil!!
-Naima.
Very Bad Appearance with Very Good heart is fine for you is it 🙂
Yeah, after all character(heart) matters!
-Naima.
Then i will find that person for you 🙂 To the worst in appearance and very good in characters 🙂 lol
When did I say its compulsory? lol
-Naima.
I thought you will keep up wordings as well as others wordings too..lol
Oh come on, I am still up to my wordings – Good Heart beats good looks; it is just that it ain’t necessary that everybody with a good heart doesn’t look good but you can still find one for me if you want to 😉
-Naima.
Already i have a job 🙂 so you can give it some of your friends 🙂
Hahaha 😀
You backed off so easily huh??
-Naima.
When there is someone to find for you…how could i involve in it? it’s a life so you need only one option to choose rather than choosing one from more 🙂
Let’s see what happens – you never know how many choices are on the way (lol)
-Naima.
I don’t want to provide choice in your life so i backed off 🙂
Why not? Don’t know such a guy?? (lol)
-Naima.
I don’t know what’s your taste for your guy? Maybe who is totally opposite as far as your character is concerned. Calm and composed guy 🙂
Do you mean I am not calm and composed eh??? (LOL)
-Naima.
🙂 Sorry you are calm while you eat 🙂 and composed when you work :)…Opposite poles always attracts…
Hahaha 😀
These are the only times when I am not calm and composed!! (lol)
-Naima.
Maybe during your prayer and singing time you’re calm….while composing songs you’re are composed 🙂
Oh yes, now you guessed it right!! Look, stay with me and you will get wisdom for free!! (lol)
-Naima.
I am a food lover..if you’re ready accept food expense then i will go ahead with your blissful decision :)..I have gained through books already 🙂 Maybe if you wanna to gain wisdom read more books and pray god 🙂
Hahaha 😀
And I love cooking – it wont be that expensive for me!! Oh, I do pray and read books so wisdom is in mt pocket (lol)
-Naima.
The dishes which i love are most expensive one’s ….you need to cook based on my wishes…then i will come..Knowledge is like an ocean. So you cannot say end to reading 🙂
Hahaha 😀
Done, dude! For knowledge, expenses doesnt matter!! Yeah, reading is too important. I agree 🙂
-Naima.
For eating, expense matter’s a lot 🙂 and traveling too 🙂 For reading, no expenses is required. So what’s the conclusion mam 🙂
The conclusion is, I take back my invitation! I am good-to-go with my books! (lol)
-Naima.
Good deal 🙂 Maybe next time you can invite me again 🙂
And may be next time, you can help me save my money again (lol)
-Naima.
If you’re going to cook then the expense is going less as you said 🙂 you can go ahead with your plan 🙂 or else you can write a poem for me 🙂 who would be better deal 🙂
Hahaha 😀
Good brains you have!! So for now, I can write you a poem but what would you like it to be about?
-Naima.
Anything what ever you feel about me 🙂 as far as it doesn’t make me as a joker 🙂
You are not a joker, NEVER! 🙂
-Naima.
Is it? then who am i? when can i expect your poem?
Yeah, exactly 🙂
-Naima.
Exactly what???
Exactly anything (wink)
-Naima.
if its anything..Cooking Food and Varieties in it comes to my mind 🙂
Oh really? And??
-Naima.
And a Glass of hot water for food to get digested 🙂 that’s it 🙂 Cheers 🙂
Cheers!! [Smiling]
-Naima.
Cheers too 🙂
Smiling..
-Naima.
Always 🙂
I have the same brain as everyone 🙂 it’s all about how we tune it 🙂 Anything what ever you feel about me 🙂 as far as it doesn’t make me as a joker 🙂
Hahaha 😀
Share your brains and heart and you will receive a poem 🙂
-Naima.
How can i share my brain and heart to you? Maybe you can ask me questions to know whats in my brain and heart so that you will get your share to you 🙂
Hahaha 😀
Can you answer the invisible questions that may allow me to know you *clearing throat*
-Naima.
Ok sure..Start your invisible question let me answer it…
How can I start up invisible questions? You tend to answer them yourself, dear one.
Answer secretly. Shhh.. (lol)
-Naima.
You think something in your mind and give me a clue..let me find the answer and i will give clue to make you guess..lol
I am clueless (lol)
-Naima.
If you’re clueless, then be visible in questing me 🙂
What makes you so smart?? [wink] do you consume almonds in a good quantity?? [lol]
-Naima.
lol..are you kidding me? Am not smart as you 🙂 does eating almond makes smart as you ?? lol
Oh yeah, my mum thinks the crediot goes to her efficiency to soak almonds every night and then she would peel it off in the morning and make me eat with honey! Sounds delicious??
-Naima.
Mouth watering 🙂 But i don’t eat instead i drink a cup of milk every night 🙂
I drink a cup of milk very night too. Bravo!
-Naima.
But i drink it along with pepper 🙂 you don’t is it 🙂
Never! Horlicks works better!
-Naima.
Maybe for you 🙂 It works(Horlicks) for me in the evening 🙂
Cool.. It is yummy! [lol]
-Naima.
It’s dummy to be frank 🙂
You have a good sense of humor!
-Naima.
Is it? I thought the other way 🙂 To be frank..am calm and composed person 🙂
I am sure you are calm and composed that’s why you can bear with me and my thoughts. [lol]
-Naima.
🙂 All can bear with you because you’re a good debater…Maybe you can try writing about some good dishes and procedure to cook it 🙂 i can make a try 🙂
You gave me a good idea for upcoming blog posts [wink]
-Naima.
But try to balance between your work and blog. We can have any number of blogs but we need to maintain it consistently without disappointing the readers 🙂 If its a food blog obviously 🙂
You’re right! I think I can be disappointing when my studies will resume!
-Naima.
Good…Better concentrate on your studies and achieve your goal….When you became granny, you can write and maintain plenty of blogs. Time will be yours during that time 🙂
Hahaha..
I will maintain my studies with blog – what say? I dont wanna be such an old blogger.
-Naima.
then no issues..if you can maintain 🙂 Heart will be pure and gold when you grow older or old blogger 🙂
I hope so.. Much to show to my grand children then.
-Naima.
How could you go back so soon to future by thinking of grand children 🙂 Nice goal 🙂
Won’t they have a granny with loads of stories and adventures eh? lol
-Naima.
Yup but it’s all their experience and fiction stories …
Yeah, adventurous experiences!
-Naima.
Usually it would pleasant…maybe you make your life adventurous….What happened to the poem?
Poem about you?
-Naima.
About whom then !!!!
You didn’t answer my invisible questions! Anyway, give an account of yourself!
-Naima.
You haven’t given any clue about your invisible question yet 🙂 What account? You mean bank account or Credit Card Account???
Hahaha =)
You asked that question like my dad.. lol
-Naima.
Thanks 🙂
You’re always welcome! =)
-Naima.
Calm but not all time, Talkative sometimes, Bookworm occasionally, Sportive weekend …Is this account fine??
Wow.. You’re so perfect, aren’t you [wink]
-Naima.
You gotta great words to inspire others 🙂 cool 🙂
Hahaha.. thank you.
-Naima.
Keep inspiring 🙂 Pray for everyone 🙂
I do pray for everyone, you pray for me too!
-Naima.
I will do it for everyone along with yours 🙂 Who are the persons do you get inspired and reason for it?? Especially bloggers 🙂
I get inspiration from everybody – we all have the capability to learn from anybody and everybody!
-Naima.
Easy to be enthralled and encircled in this gossamer dream you’ve written ~` Sincerely Deborah
I agree, easy to be enthralled but not every time! Life teaches us with the time!
Thank you for your comment, Deborah 🙂
-Naima.
One should learn from you about writing poem in effective and romantic way 🙂
Oh really? Intentions to make me blush?? (lol)
-Naima.
No it’s true. You feel up and write things. We usually write then we will feel up 🙂
And yet another compliment that I can not handle! (lol)
-Naima.
Who said you can’t able to handle ? you gotta tendency to fight till the end until you taste victory 🙂
Oh right! Someone knows me so well *winks*
-Naima.
Plenty of bloggers know about you 🙂 Even i came to know now 🙂
Oh I see *winks*
I am glad to know you too 🙂
-Naima.
I do see :> I am glad everyone knows naima…soon whole world will know 🙂
Are you trying to explain me how I will be famous with paparazzi photographers around me?? (lol)
-Naima.
We bloggers are here as paparazzi photographers to make you famous 🙂
Oh really??? I never knew that so what are your preparations then?
-Naima.
Already i had implemented one…i mean our conversation which will make you famous 🙂
Hahaha 😀
A good deal! Impressed 🙂
-Naima.
Hope you’re not depressed 🙂 Thank god 🙂
Why would I be?? Cheers!
-Naima.
Good 🙂 Cheers too 🙂
🙂
-Naima.
🙂
The power of passion between two human beings.