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Seeing is not believing,
Believing is not feeling.

As I heard him declaring his departure

He shot an arrow as miraculously as an archer

Listening to his bizarre words, I was on my knees

Possessed no strength to hear, smell, touch or see

I watched him parting in the dark rainy night

Wishing a final goodbye with a vivid smile radiating light

I strolled home single-handedly weeping and crying

His words stuttered in my mind – my tears complying

My mum awaiting me at the home’s door

Disguising the ache, the veil of bliss that I wore

She asked me where was I?

I sighed and told her a lie

How can I tell her it was a lad?

Who deceived and took everything I had?

My numb body directing my senses to the way to my room

Thoughts ruled my mind and soul – this appalling doom

I cursed myself for being in love as a dope

There was no rainbow after this rain, no bliss and no hope

He left me for the sake he was done

Likewise, he is going to find another one

He is a traitor, a betrayer and a player

Thus ruled my heart for an eternity as a mayor

Depression and distress was now the food to my soul

I salute him for his significant triumph to attain his desired goal

One day when no one was in the house

I clasped a knife due to that louse

To Be Continued…

Betrayal – Part I

About globalunison

Writing is my passion and that is what I do here on this blog. I write about everything, whether it be Nature, Love, Hate, Relationships, Humans, Personal Life (where I discuss lessons learnt through real-life experiences), Food, Philosophy (sometimes) and much more. I write in any form whether it be Prose or Poetry. I am in search of ‘Myself’, hence there is not much I can tell you about me. Perhaps, I have a very brilliant idea. Why don’t you come along with me on my journey? I will always care to share and you can also enjoy the ride. For now, this is it. I am ‘ME’ – a wanderer in search of a fulfilling life. Until next time, Love Living Life! I express my sincere gratitude to all my Readers! -Naima

66 responses to “BETRAYAL (Part II)

  1. Alastair

    A very sad and ongoing story.

  2. ~Lady Day ⋅

    Wow. Girl. Just wow. I wish to read more, yet. Am afraid. Hugs to you dear. Xo

  3. Pragati

    Stupendous…!!! Its beautifully written, at the same time sad to go though it.

  4. you certainly set this one up nicely. i didn’t expect that ending but can see why. i would have to say that players can be equally be of either gender. i do identify with the feel here because i’ve seen plenty of male players in my time. nicely done naima:)

    • Hey Don,
      I wonder if you are not writing poetry or I am not getting the updates. Will check on your blog-site just now.
      Yeah, I know what you mean. But this ain’t the ending – few parts still to come and there was Part I too, if you wish to read. Though I wont blame males to be the players always as women at times leaves men behind in this but males are specifically highlighted!
      There are my poems with the other-way scenario too.
      Thank you for the appreciation.

      • i’ve got some catching up to do with notifications here. probably get to them after work. i will get to your first one. i can see you’ve seen my latest one. i haven’t been posting daily as i was. it’s coming slower, still looking at older stuff while new stuff sits in the brain.

      • Wow! You are too kind to reply to me first (lol) – but all I want to say is your old stuff is always catching and may I ask why is the new stuff sitting in your brain, let it out hero! (lol)

  5. Very powerful images. Made my heart ache, for most of us have experienced this type of betrayal at one time or another along the way. What doesn’t kill us DOES truly make us, if not stronger hopefully at least, a bit wiser. If this is you and not a ‘story’ I applaud the courage to share it an keep going on. much love and I look forward to reading more. z

  6. globaldruginfo ⋅

    Better join as a script writer in Hollywood movie or you can start writing books…You gotta bright future 🙂 Make sure to appoint me as your Personal Assistant(PA) 🙂

  7. Pieces

    OMG! You wrote it so well. I just wish it does not become anybody’s reality ever.

  8. Ouch!
    Powerful and wonderful.

  9. You got me on my nerves 😉
    When I read that last two lines, I scrolled and found the part has ended, and I was like, Oh damn! Why you had to put an end right there.

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  12. Alex Jones ⋅

    Awesome way with words.

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