Note: Hey there Folks! This is my very first duet with a fellow-blogger, Neeraj. We enjoyed composing it and I hope you all would enjoy reading. Additionally, I encourage all who doesn’t know him to visit his blog – a very talented poet and song writer. Thank you.
Stay here, closer,
Let me run out of breath,
We’ve got this moment,
It’ll not be here forever,
It may never come again,
Let me live,
Every moment of it,
Let us die in its arms tonight.
(Me)
Stay there, far away,
No need for you to be here today,
We had the moment and we did it all,
Let go of me,
Let me fall,
It may never occur to you,
Love ain’t lust, I’m through.
Stay here, closer,
Let me inhale you slowly,
Let me kiss you properly,
Once it is over,
It won’t come again,
Let me live,
Every moment of it,
Let me not be wise tonight.
(Me)
Stay there, far away,
Don’t you play with my hair,
Don’t you dare to come any near,
Let me sob for all I’ve done,
Let me take the blame for once,
It may never occur to you,
We were through way before we knew.
(Chorus)
The moment we thought could get us together,
The moment we thought could get us better,
The moment we thought could stay there forever,
It passed and we surpassed,
‘Cause we never tried,
To hold it tight,
To make it right…
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i love this! I read it on Neeraj’s site. Hopefully this is the first of many more???? 🙂
Hopefully, it was fun composing it! Thank you as always Kim =)
With love,
-Naima.
The duet was very interesting as it showed varying viewpoints.
Thank you so much for dropping by, following and leaving me with a comment! I am glad, you enjoyed! Will be visiting your blog, soon (The name seems too interesting) =)
With warm wishes,
-Naima.
Thanks for stopping by mine. I am glad you like the name. I have a website http://www.quirkybooks.net that I am changing into a much more attractive design and it will have an e-Book store in a couple of months time with my books to buy on it. I also have a Facebook page http://www.facebook.com/quirkybooks.net and I am on Twitter http://www.twitter.com/quirkybooksnet
I will visit your site soon enough, already following your blog =)
Hope to come across soon enough! Have a good day! =)
-Naima.
This is an awesome duet naima. Hope to hear you singing this on your next post. Please! 🙂
Haha.. Thank you (As always) B!
Singing and me – I don’t think so, I will try someday though, may be! Have a good day! =)
-Naima.
wow.. interesting duet, nicely written.. 🙂
Thank you Abi, It means a lot coming from you knowing how heck of a writer you are yourself! =)
With love and warm wishes,
-Naima.
Wow! This is such an awesome work by you two.\m/
Rahul
I would love to work with you some day too, sounds like fun eh? :p
Thank you anyway and enjoy your Sunday!
-Naima.
Haha! Why not, Naima? I don’t have any issues in accepting your deal, Madam. Have a great Sunday for you as well. 🙂
Rahul
Awwww.. I’d love to do a project with you as a team too!
-Naima.
Fine, dear! I promise you. Let’s do it. 🙂
Rahul
great one Naima ! u and Neeraj rock! 🙂
Awww.. Thank you so much! Your latest poetry(The graceful Swan) was absolutely stunning! Have a good day!
-Naima.
Thank you dear! you too have a nice day!
good feel here. nice opposites almost like bi-polar as I see it.
Erm, yeah, I liked it that way! Eventually he agreed too after complaining how negative I am all the time lol
Thank you for dropping by and leaving a comment! Have a good Sunday! Hope you are feeling well! =)
-Naima.
i’m feeling better naima. if ya saw my latest it kinda shows that.
I will just hop on to your site! Give me a moment lol
-Naima.
actually the one before it…*L*
Absolutely fascinating. What a wonderful team! Hugs, Gina
Thank you Gina, have missed your comments! Your visit is always appreciated!
With love and warm wishes,
-Naima.
wonderful fluctuations of pulsating pulls !
Thank you very much, your visit is always appreciated!
With warm wishes,
-Naima.
Very good!
I like this alot
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Thank you very much, your visit is always appreciated!
With love,
-Naima.
I have never encountered a duet poem before. Good teamwork!
Thank you Alex, I am glad you like it =)
-Naima.