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Note: Hey there Folks! This is my very first duet with a fellow-blogger, Neeraj. We enjoyed composing it and I hope you all would enjoy reading. Additionally, I encourage all who doesn’t know him to visit his blog – a very talented poet and song writer. Thank you. 



Stay here, closer,

Let me run out of breath,

We’ve got this moment,

It’ll not be here forever,

It may never come again,

Let me live,

Every moment of it,

Let us die in its arms tonight.


Stay there, far away,

No need for you to be here today,

We had the moment and we did it all,

Let go of me,

Let me fall,

It may never occur to you,

Love ain’t lust, I’m through.


Stay here, closer,

Let me inhale you slowly,

Let me kiss you properly,

Once it is over,

It won’t come again,

Let me live,

Every moment of it,

Let me not be wise tonight.


Stay there, far away,

Don’t you play with my hair,

Don’t you dare to come any near,

Let me sob for all I’ve done,

Let me take the blame for once,

It may never occur to you,

We were through way before we knew.


The moment we thought could get us together,
The moment we thought could get us better,
The moment we thought could stay there forever,
It passed and we surpassed,
‘Cause we never tried,
To hold it tight,
To make it right…

About globalunison

Writing is my passion and that is what I do here on this blog. I write about everything, whether it be Nature, Love, Hate, Relationships, Humans, Personal Life (where I discuss lessons learnt through real-life experiences), Food, Philosophy (sometimes) and much more. I write in any form whether it be Prose or Poetry. I am in search of ‘Myself’, hence there is not much I can tell you about me. Perhaps, I have a very brilliant idea. Why don’t you come along with me on my journey? I will always care to share and you can also enjoy the ride. For now, this is it. I am ‘ME’ – a wanderer in search of a fulfilling life. Until next time, Love Living Life! I express my sincere gratitude to all my Readers! -Naima

31 responses to “Moments

  1. words4jp

    i love this! I read it on Neeraj’s site. Hopefully this is the first of many more???? 🙂

  2. The duet was very interesting as it showed varying viewpoints.

  3. Balu

    This is an awesome duet naima. Hope to hear you singing this on your next post. Please! 🙂

  4. abichica

    wow.. interesting duet, nicely written.. 🙂

  5. Insight

    Wow! This is such an awesome work by you two.\m/


  6. soumyav

    great one Naima ! u and Neeraj rock! 🙂

  7. good feel here. nice opposites almost like bi-polar as I see it.

  8. Professions for PEACE ⋅

    Absolutely fascinating. What a wonderful team! Hugs, Gina

  9. wonderful fluctuations of pulsating pulls !

  10. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words ⋅

    Very good!
    I like this alot

  11. Alex Jones ⋅

    I have never encountered a duet poem before. Good teamwork!

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