Remember the summer of 1969?
He can’t get her face out of his mind,
The gleaming eyes and her smile so divine,
At the age of 17, love was kind,
Their love was innocent so were their hearts,
Nothing was right or wrong,
However the passion to master the art,
The art to love and to be loved lifelong,
Behind the trees,
Beneath the stars,
They held hands,
They vowed never to be apart,
Life is time,
They tried to rhyme,
And there they were,
Savoring love,
With the burning scars.
Can they forget the Summer 1969?
Delights of the young love re-defined,
Cherishing each other every single day,
Young love evaded the uncertainty on its way,
For them, love was a fairy-tale what everybody say,
The story of Cinderella, Snow-white or any other princess,
Where happily-ever-afters were never to decay,
Their naive vision has to be flawless,
Without realization, they were offered solace,
Life was brutal and now they knew,
Challenges may pursue their motives,
However, the flame of love would get them through,
Behind the trees, Beneath the stars, They held hands, They vowed never to be apart, Life is time, They tried to rhyme, And there they were, Savoring love, With the burning scars.
To Be Continued…
Story is fine…but I was expecting a song 😐
Awww B.. I didn’t mean to disappoint you but I am not sure if I can really compose the song I have written myself considering I dont have my guitar over here! But I will try to do Karoke and post it on here as soon as possible just so you are not disappointed, sounds like a fine deal? =)
Thank you for commenting as always =)
Warm wishes,
-Naima.
Deal! 🙂
Great, then karoke some day soon! =)
Have a good morning =)
-Naima.
Good Night naima 🙂
Hahaha.. Night B =)
-Naima.
I cannot wait till the next part – I love the refrain – 🙂
my veins have been touched. I need not say anything more….:)
I don’t need you say anything more, you made my day (if that explains it all ) =)
With love,
-Naima.
I love that Naima. Gorgeous
Thank you so much, it is always good to hear from you =)
With warm wishes,
-Naima.
🙂
Wonderful read!
Thank you, I always appreciate your comments and visits! Stay blessed!
With love and warm wishes,
-Naima.
Thank you for your comment as always, your visit is a very humble gesture every time =)
With love,
-Naima.
I wish, they will not move apart from eachother in life! Looking forward to hear the next part from you. 🙂
Rahul