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For as long as she was in his life, my presence wouldn’t count. For as long as I will have to be compared to an image of another being who was clearly seamless, I wouldn’t relish my imperfect reality. For as long as I was invisible to him, I would have to retaliate to convince him that I exist; that I have feelings too and that there beats a heart in the centre of my body that is capable of loving and hating. Now, it was in his hands to decide which of the lesser evil to choose.

About globalunison

Writing is my passion and that is what I do here on this blog. I write about everything, whether it be Nature, Love, Hate, Relationships, Humans, Personal Life (where I discuss lessons learnt through real-life experiences), Food, Philosophy (sometimes) and much more. I write in any form whether it be Prose or Poetry. I am in search of ‘Myself’, hence there is not much I can tell you about me. Perhaps, I have a very brilliant idea. Why don’t you come along with me on my journey? I will always care to share and you can also enjoy the ride. For now, this is it. I am ‘ME’ – a wanderer in search of a fulfilling life. Until next time, Love Living Life! I express my sincere gratitude to all my Readers! -Naima

25 responses to “Invisibility

  1. I missed you!! Your writing seems darker now… I like it.

  2. soumyav

    always nice to read yu

  3. words4jp

    This certainly makes a mind think. I really like it;) lots.

  4. He would be stupid if compares.
    This is a nice weave of emotions.

    • Thank you. How it can it be stupid? A person can compare easily no matter how magnificent you look or how sophisticated your personality is! It’s just humanly!


      • Comparison is evil. I won’t judge anyone not even by comparing. Once the comparison comes in picture the person starts ignoring other factors that might interest him/her. Everyone has their merits and demerits and are unique in their own way, we always say that why then compare?

  5. Powerfully written, passion and frustration beautifully expressed.
    AnElephant loves it.

  6. Powerful words, Naima, and words probably many of us can relate to at some time in our lives…xx

  7. very strong, cutting, and raw for sure !!

  8. Insight

    Choose the right one as per your inner call! If you’re not that confident regarding it, never ask anybody else other than you and go according to your inner call again. 🙂

    – Rahul

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