You were my master plan,
My eternity and my life span,
Nothing close to my imagination,
Nothing close to an ordinary man,
You were you,
A man dressed in blue,
For some reason,
I couldn’t see through,
A volcano erupting,
For I knew,
You were a man,
Born to be loved.
You were my everything,
My autumn and my spring,
The song I loved to sing,
Nothing close to the love I read about,
Nothing close to my fears and doubts,
You were you,
A man who knew the art,
For some reason,
I couldn’t stop my heart,
From falling,
From wanting,
From breaking,
The universe tore itself apart,
For this love I felt,
Nothing less than magic,
For I never knew,
It was unfortunate and tragic,
But what I always knew,
You were a man,
Born to be loved.
:3 i loved it.
Thank you Kavz. I appreciate your kind words.
Blessings,
-Naima
The poem flows beautifully. Good job!
Thank you for being so kind with your words. I always appreciate your feedback on my poetry.
Have a great weekend.
-Naima
This is the most beautiful thing i have ever read.. It brought tear to my eyes. Because it is exactly how i feel about my ex. To meet someone you feel so strongly about and not be able to be with them is horrible.
You made my day with this beautiful and heartfelt comment. I know what you are talking about feeling strongly for somebody; it happens and it doesn’t leave you as fast as you’d like to abandon it. Sometimes the worse part is it leaves you feeling you weren’t good enough and they deserved better but what if you tried your best?
I wish you all the happiness and luck for your future. Take care.
Thank you for your comment and time to read. I appreciate the effort.
Blessings,
-Naima
I find myself easily loving your poem Naima! Its truly beautiful…thanks for the blessings you always send my way. Have a very lovely Sunday…hugs, love and blessing to you always my sister!
Thank you very much for your kind words and blessing, Wendell. It’s always a pleasure to have you read my work. Thank you for reading.
Blessings,
-Naima
And you are a woman born to be loved.
That’s a good thing to hear but feelings don’t always agree with the mind. Thank you for your kind words.
Much love,
-Naima
🙂
I feel that all throughout my inner companion. wonderfully written naima:)
Thank you Don. I appreciate your comments and feedback.
Have a great week ahead.
-Naima
It’s beautiful, Naima.. Really touched my soul in some mysterious way. And I am bawling.
I am glad that you could relate. I hope you are okay.
Take care and have a great week ahead.
-Naima