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Free Falling

You continue to drag me down,
This path of deceit and lies,
You continue to hold me down,
Dominating my thoughts with your shuttered eyes,
You continue to hurt me,
Compelling me to live in the glory of our past,
You continue to surprise me,
The audacity to say ‘I love you’ when you couldn’t make it last,
So I’m free falling,
We can create our own destiny,
We can have a life in the garden of our dreams
You and I can be the perfect team,
So just take a chance,
Free fall along with me,
Breathe in the freedom of a fearless glance,
An escape to our paradise for an eternal romance.

About globalunison

Writing is my passion and that is what I do here on this blog. I write about everything, whether it be Nature, Love, Hate, Relationships, Humans, Personal Life (where I discuss lessons learnt through real-life experiences), Food, Philosophy (sometimes) and much more. I write in any form whether it be Prose or Poetry. I am in search of ‘Myself’, hence there is not much I can tell you about me. Perhaps, I have a very brilliant idea. Why don’t you come along with me on my journey? I will always care to share and you can also enjoy the ride. For now, this is it. I am ‘ME’ – a wanderer in search of a fulfilling life. Until next time, Love Living Life! I express my sincere gratitude to all my Readers! -Naima

24 responses to “Free Falling

  1. Oh wow! It’s lovely smile kept on increasing till the last line. I hope that someone free falls with you too. 🙂
    Best wishes

  2. barrira

    I ❤ this, beautiful!

  3. Love is easy. But relationship is a harder work in order to make it work – at all. Lovely poem! 🙂

    • That is one hundred percent true — anybody can fall in love but only few can make it work.
      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Sherrie ❤
      Have a good day.


  4. megpill

    If only beautifully written persuasion worked on all people. But then we have to remember that if we need to persuade someone, it’s not right. Sorry, just projecting my problems onto your work haha! But clearly I definitely related to this!

  5. Nimmi

    Wow!! This one is awesome, dear 🙂

  6. Breathe in the freedom of a fearless glance,
    An escape to our paradise for an eternal romance.

    Uff uff these lines made me gaga for ur writing! you are a gem fund here :*

  7. Paloma Renee ⋅

    “Breathe in the freedom of a fearless glance,
    An escape to our paradise for an eternal romance.”
    These two lines are absolutely beautiful and I can almost feel it through the words. Thank you for sharing such beautiful poetry!

  8. Hello Naima,
    This was so touching. Very very nice.
    Specially the line :”Compelling me to live in the glory of our past”
    What an emotion!

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