You continue to drag me down,
This path of deceit and lies,
You continue to hold me down,
Dominating my thoughts with your shuttered eyes,
You continue to hurt me,
Compelling me to live in the glory of our past,
You continue to surprise me,
The audacity to say ‘I love you’ when you couldn’t make it last,
So I’m free falling,
We can create our own destiny,
We can have a life in the garden of our dreams
You and I can be the perfect team,
So just take a chance,
Free fall along with me,
Breathe in the freedom of a fearless glance,
An escape to our paradise for an eternal romance.
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Writing is my passion and that is what I do here on this blog. I write about everything, whether it be Nature, Love, Hate, Relationships, Humans, Personal Life (where I discuss lessons learnt through real-life experiences), Food, Philosophy (sometimes) and much more. I write in any form whether it be Prose or Poetry. I am in search of ‘Myself’, hence there is not much I can tell you about me. Perhaps, I have a very brilliant idea. Why don’t you come along with me on my journey? I will always care to share and you can also enjoy the ride.
For now, this is it. I am ‘ME’ – a wanderer in search of a fulfilling life. Until next time, Love Living Life!
I express my sincere gratitude to all my Readers!
-Naima
Oh wow! It’s lovely Naima..my smile kept on increasing till the last line. I hope that someone free falls with you too. 🙂
Best wishes
Your comment made my day, Archita!! ❤
Blessings and love,
-Naima
Aww..I’m glad I did that. ♥
I ❤ this, beautiful!
You’ve just made me *blush* ❤
Lots of love,
-Naima
You’re adorbs ❤
Okay, now you are over-dosing me with sugary stuff, B!! ❤
-Naima
All rightly earned ❤
❤
-Naima
Love is easy. But relationship is a harder work in order to make it work – at all. Lovely poem! 🙂
That is one hundred percent true — anybody can fall in love but only few can make it work.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, Sherrie ❤
Have a good day.
-Naima
If only beautifully written persuasion worked on all people. But then we have to remember that if we need to persuade someone, it’s not right. Sorry, just projecting my problems onto your work haha! But clearly I definitely related to this!
Well, if not persuading then suggesting works? 🙂
Thank you for your comment.
Have a great weekend.
-Naima
Wow!! This one is awesome, dear 🙂
Thank you Nimmi 🙂
Kind Regards,
-Naima
Always love… ❤
Breathe in the freedom of a fearless glance,
An escape to our paradise for an eternal romance.
Uff uff these lines made me gaga for ur writing! you are a gem fund here :*
Haha Izza, you always add smiles and laughs to my day! I can’t thank you enough for your comments 😀
Much love and blessings to a wonderful girl out there.
-Naima
Ditto goes for you~ i am glad i found you in this bloggers orbit ❤ 🙂
found*
“Breathe in the freedom of a fearless glance,
An escape to our paradise for an eternal romance.”
These two lines are absolutely beautiful and I can almost feel it through the words. Thank you for sharing such beautiful poetry!
Thank you for stopping by and reading. Your kind words are greatly appreciated.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
Hello Naima,
This was so touching. Very very nice.
Specially the line :”Compelling me to live in the glory of our past”
What an emotion!
Thank you for reading, Shruti — I am glad you liked it.
Wishing you a very good day.
-Naima