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When you are emotionally exhausted,
When you have nowhere to go,
When you feel let down,
When you feel life is passing you by,
When you think the world is against you,
When you feel like you can’t go on,
Take a step back and turn around,
I will be standing there to hold your hand,
When you are at your lowest point,
I will embrace your flaws and let you be,
Tears will be an unknown mystery for your eyes,
Pain will eventually subside,
Estoy y siempre estaré aquí para ti,
You can always count on me,
But some day if you ever decide to feel my love,
Feel it in the air you breathe,
Let its magic fill your soul with hopes and dreams,
And if you ever decide to keep my love,
Keep it alive forever within your core,
Let it be your addiction to always come back for more,
And if you ever decide to choose my love,
Choose it only if it can be your home,
Let it be your safe haven to escape this world,
For this time if and when we do this,
We do this right from the start,
But this time I’ve got to see us through before we fall apart,
This time I’ve got to tame the beat of your untamable heart.

About globalunison

Writing is my passion and that is what I do here on this blog. I write about everything, whether it be Nature, Love, Hate, Relationships, Humans, Personal Life (where I discuss lessons learnt through real-life experiences), Food, Philosophy (sometimes) and much more. I write in any form whether it be Prose or Poetry. I am in search of ‘Myself’, hence there is not much I can tell you about me. Perhaps, I have a very brilliant idea. Why don’t you come along with me on my journey? I will always care to share and you can also enjoy the ride. For now, this is it. I am ‘ME’ – a wanderer in search of a fulfilling life. Until next time, Love Living Life! I express my sincere gratitude to all my Readers! -Naima

36 responses to “Untamable

  1. Beautiful work, Naima Cheers =)

  2. izza ifzaal ⋅

    Beautifully orchestrated

  3. Very nice. Mounting passion.

  4. Hey!
    I nominated you for the Free style writing challenge.
    Check out my blog for the details.:D

  5. Great work Naima !! Loved it 🙂

  6. But Naima, taming the untamable would create an entirely different person! Could you chance that? 🙂

  7. The Spanish is used beautifully–the poem is truly beautiful.

    And if you ever decide to choose my love,
    Choose it only if it can be your home,


  8. amoafowaa

    Theme of assurance, persona loving the addressed more than his or her life. Nice.

  9. Insight

    Beautifully penned, Leicester girl! ^_^

    ~ Rahul

  10. Beautiful lines, especially loved the last few.. 🙂

  11. emmylgant

    I love this one. The rythm is fantastic; like a heart beat, it underscores the words.

  12. The Bibliophile Diaries ⋅

    Hey Naima, I’m sorry I’ve been busy with school and I haven’t been able to catch up on your posts but I’m glad that I have now. Great work there 🙂

  13. Wow …loved this too!

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