Right turn, left turn or an absolute round about
“Where the hell are you”, I shout
Hasn’t he heard me screaming on his door?
Wide awake; I walk barefoot on the seashore
I feel his sight in the tranquility of the sea
I sense his touch in the caresses of the wind
I perceive his smell when it rains on me
And I dream of us entwined as one
May be this is a life about which my mum told me
When breathing is forced and the soul can’t be set free
I walk and walk when memories take over
The kisses I will cherish and caresses moreover
The sugar-coated words which echo like a mystery in my head
The open wounds which bled over the thousand tears I shed
I need his fingers to sew the wounds with a thread
I lust his aroma and the words unsaid
I feel his sight in the tranquility of the sea
I sense his touch in the caresses of the wind
I perceive his smell when it rains on me
And I dream of us entwined as one
May be this is a life about which my dad told me
When reality demands dreams and so do we
I glare at his silhouette on the sea
Hatred rushes in my blood along with the fire to avenge him
Gradually love for him melts my fury in a heart beat
I beg for the time to turn back and let me compete
The desire to rewrite my script on a new sheet
I crave his blood to refill my ink pen
I yearn for his one last touch all over again
I feel his sight in the tranquility of the sea
I sense his touch in the caresses of the wind
I perceive his smell when it rains on me
And I dream of us entwined as one
May be this is a life about which he told me himself
When a fairy tale can’t be dreamt or lived being yourself.
Who is this all about Naima? Its very nice and seems to leave some space inside you.
I have no idea myself who is it about despite of the fact that this one is very special! It gripped me hard enough once I read it after I was done writing it!
-Naima.
Maybe there is someone already around,, and you tend to deny.
Only if I am unaware of the presence! It entirely depends… (Smiles)
-Naima.
Very smart! But you can’t remain unaware for very long 🙂
I can unless and until I don’t want to consider it 🙂
-Naima.
PS– How are ya anyway?
That would be really bad if you don’t want to consider. I am fine as usual !
Not as bad as being hurt in the end after I have accepted the glory and pain embracing me simultaneously 🙂
-Naima.
Are you afraid of being hurt or hurting him?
Either way – humans are tend to make flaws! 🙂
-Naima.
Hmm.. but who’ll correct the flaws then? Anyways, was just messing around.. you don’t have to consider anyone until you so dont want him.
Hahah.. And I was messing around much more! Cause I have no idea why was there a need to get too philosophical or rather lame when the answer is simply a big NO about anybody’s presence around! lol
-Naima.
Look up at the sky.. maybe someone’s watching behind the clouds for ages 😉
Someone who doesn’t have the guts to emerge, why should I go seek such a person? 😉
-Naima.
Maybe he is afraid that he wont be treated well by this angel 😉
Angels are excpetional – they doesn’t know what evil is then how would I treat him not well if I am an angel?
-Naima.
PS– Ya need coffee to make sense lol 😉
Because this angel is so unpredictable.. I may need something “Stronger” to make sense I guess other than coffee 😉
Ya need few glances of the dimples then! lol Now that does make sense! lol
-Naima.
No dimples until next week.. am I allowed to talk nonsense till then?
superb asusual!!!!god bless u naima!!!!
Awww.. Thank you so very much! God Bless!
Happy 2013, talk to you soon~
-Naima.
oh, thank u…..long time since i had a chat !!!!!
Yeah, right! We will talk soon 🙂
-Naima.
Nice poem and picture. One has to be so creative or in love 😉 to write such poems. Hmmm, who knows..As your title says…
May Be ❤
May be… Possibilities can’t be denied 🙂
Thank you very much for your warm compliments! 🙂
With best wishes,
-Naima.
As always, some deep feelings in your words.
Thank you so very much for commenting, reading and letting me know your views about it! It means a lot! 🙂
-Naima.
just loved it !! 🙂
hugs and kisses
Archana
Thank you so very much 🙂
Hugs right back,
-Naima.
[ Smiles ] Lovely as always!
Thank you so very much for lovely comment as always, Renard 🙂
-Naima.
Beautifully written. your talent is really blossoming.
Thank you very much Kim 🙂
Love,
Naima.
You are very welcome.
Mesmerizing read. You write and express with such a charm, it hits the mind and the heart simultaneously! 😛
Awww.. Your comments always make my day! Thank you for dropping by and commenting 🙂
Warm wishes,
-Naima.
Hey Naima, how’re you doing?
I see that your poetry is becoming more mature, and natural, because every word flows from your heart. I really feel something different and unique in it.
I always believe in a fairy tale, if you ever met the guy, tell him to be brave too =).
Many bless, and love,
kc
Heya Kee,
Its always good to hear your opinion – I always like it how you make it easy for me to perceive your opinion and over think to blend it with mine 🙂
If I will ever meet that guy, I will pass on your message to him 🙂
With love,
-Naima.
PS– Miss you! 🙂
Awesome poem Naima! Before one can become one with another, they have to humble themselves and be one with the creator of life, then and only then can we live and love so purposely sharing a pure love that will always blossom. So very nice to embrace your words again!
Thank you very much for dropping by and honoring me with a comment such as that 🙂
With warm wishes,
-Naima.