Memories of you stuck in my head
I cursed myself for its difficult to shred our thread
Why did you leave me on my own?
How can you pretend to be unknown?
But baby sun shines after every dark night
You may be one in the million and I blame my sight
I wont beg you for any chance, I know I am right
The truth in my eyes will rewrite my love story – the highest flight
So wait for the day when I get back to you
Get back to you to show you what I’ve got
A man of my dreams, my soul mate for a shot
You’ll be jealous and I’ll hit the right spot
So wait baby wait until I get back to you….
You complained how I snored in the bed?
Or how I slept when you talked and talked instead
Did it give you the right to smack me down?
Who were you to complain when I frowned?
Baby, have a look at your cold blue eyes
They said it all despite of my unworthy tries
So wait for the day when I get back to you
Get back to you to show you what I’ve got
A man of my dreams, my soul mate for a shot
You’ll be jealous and I’ll hit the right spot
So wait baby wait until I get back to you….
My heart still beats on the rhythm of your name
My soul calls out loud for freedom – its untamed
Baby would you let me know my blame?
Oh shame, if I have been too lame
Too lame to forgive you over again
You bruised me everyday to fulfill your aims
Pardon baby, no more love coming your way
My heart will give up on you someday
So wait for the day when I get back to you
Get back to you to show you what I’ve got
A man of my dreams, my soul mate for a shot
You’ll be jealous and I’ll hit the right spot
So wait baby wait until I get back to you….
Nice and superb rhyming. The picture is so apt as well.
Thank you so much B! I am glad you liked it 🙂
-Naima.
Nice Feel 🙂
Aww.. Thank you so very much! 🙂
Good Morning anyway!
-Naima.
🙂
Brilliant
Thank you so much! 🙂 Hope everything is good at your end! Happy 2013!
Best Wishes,
-Naima.
Awesome! Worth the wait! 🙂
Aww.. Thank you so much! So glad to have ya dropping by after so long! Anyway, happy 2013! Hope you have a sound good year ahead!
Best Wishes,
-Naima.
Thank you so much for the wishes, Naima! Same to you.
Hope you’re doing good.
Take care.
Awww….! Nicely written, Naima. 🙂
Rahul
Thank you so much Rahul! Happy 2013 once again! 🙂
-Naima.
You’re most welcome, Naima! 🙂
Rahul
Cool one dear 🙂
Awww.. Thank you so much! How are ya doing dear one? Hope everything is good on your side! Happy 2013 🙂
Best Wishes,
-Naima.
im doing great dear … i dont get ur posts in reader , 😦 how are ur classes and new campus ??
Awww.. That is too terrible to hear; you rather un-follow me and then follow me back again! That may help!
Classes and Campus is okay, just on Christmas vacations! And I just realized I am not getting your updates in teh reader as well! i will get to read your blog too 🙂
With love,
-Naima.
Wishing you a successful and healthy 2013 Naima.
Same to you Alex 🙂
With Best Wishes,
-Naima.
Naima, your words were awesomely written…and your message delivered loudly. You are a treasure move on and never devalue your worth…true love will embrace you, but make someone earn your heart, and place you first in their lives and then become one and do not let past pains harm future relationships. I have missed you my sister…thanks for the visits and the blessing of your words! Much love to you always…and never rush in!
Thank you so very much for your compliments and warm wishes! I have missed you and your blog terribly too and that day a visit to your blog enlightened my day! Thank you for your work that never fails to make me smile!
With love and blessings,
-Naima.
Wow! There’s a lot of passion in this poem. Excellent writing.
Thank you so very much Kim! It means a lot to hear this fro you! 🙂 Hope you are enjoying the chilly winds of winters! 🙂
With love,
-Naima.
Most definitely enjoying my winter. I was happy to see your post.
Awww.. How are your grandchildren doing? And how about your health??
-Naima.
I’m a little out of it but the grandkids are doing well.
heart touching one !!!!enjoyed it…
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting! 🙂
With best wishes,
-Naima.
Make the good and bad memories part of your pyramid, and you will one day rise above it to touch the star.
kc
Agreed (Noted your advise down on the calls of my brain)
Love,
-Naima.
cells of my brain*
Hi Naima..How are you ? Hope you doing well with your studies 🙂
All the best
With love
Sathya
Heya,
I am good, thanks 🙂 How are things on your side? 🙂
-Naima.
Hey
Yup..Same here..I am Fit 😀
Enjoy Life!
Sathya
beautifully written.. 🙂 👏👏👏👍👍👍
Thank you so very much 🙂
-Naima.
The lyricism in this piece is very strong! Good stuff, Naima! I was telling a fellow blogger the other day that I wish I could rhyme like how some of you do!
Heya,
thank you for dropping by and leaving a comment! Well, may be you cant rhyme but your poetry still is magical! I read some of them yestreday and I enjoyed each one I read so keep writing and stay motivated! =)
Have a good day!
-Naima.