Almost absolutely,
He took away my breath;
Almost single-handedly,
He conquered my heart.
Almost immediately,
He confessed his love;
Almost spontaneously,
He promised me a ‘Forever’.
Almost motionlessly,
He made his first move;
Almost gracefully,
He lifted me in his arms.
Almost generously,
He blew his kisses;
Almost miraculously,
He built us up.
Almost quickly,
He savored every inch of my body;
Almost boldly,
He claimed what belonged to him.
Almost effortlessly,
He became my world;
Almost promptly,
We were each other’s abode.
Almost massively;
We grew in love;
Almost flawlessly,
We held each other.
Almost necessarily,
We chose a wrong path;
Almost certainly,
We agreed to separate.
Almost accusingly,
His eyes didn’t utter a word;
Almost mournfully,
I accepted the Fate’s challenge.
Almost shortly,
I realized what I had lost;
Almost horrifyingly,
There was no way back.
Almost carefully,
I took a wound to my heart;
Almost soothingly,
I lived in peace with the pain.
Almost hungrily,
I waited and waited;
Almost harshly,
I realized the truth.
Mostly, life will almost stop happening;
If I can precisely predict about its certainty.
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but the lines almost touched the core ..with simplicity
Thank you so much ma’am for reading 🙂
Warm Regards,
-Naima
Almost nah.. most certainly I enjoyed it 🙂
Thank you Neeraj! Have a good day!
-Naima
Fantastic.
Thanks Al.
Have a good day!
-Naima
You too Naima 🙂
Extremely emotional. Very nice.
Thank you Kim! Have a great day!
-Naima
A passionate & emotional piece.
So sad when something so great dissolves…
True that. Thank you for dropping by Rosy:)
-Naima
almost…tender and bitter-sweet at times…it sure lingers..liked it.
I like how creatively you commented 🙂 thank you for dropping by. Hope to see you around often 🙂
-Naima
superb piece naima. the word “almost” it’s the big carrier of the whole piece. it blends the two elements. meaning like this – almost passionate-almost painless. as in all cases in regards to relationships, the learning curve is afterwards. I have some away from the “great escape” meaning work and i’ll catch up on your blog and see what I’ve missed.
Wow. Almost, just ‘wow.’ This is beautiful, soaring, uplifting, and then almost inevitably heart wrenching, sad, and soulful. A roller-coaster of highs and lows, it spoke to me. I love this.
Ahh, thank you so much! Although your work has left me trembling for the whole day! Lol *Can’t get enough*
-Naima
Lovely read, Naima! It elapses the beauty of certain feelings that lies inside someone. 🙂
– Rahul
Thank you for your kind words. I am delighted that you enjoyed it.
Warm Regards,
-Naima