Can you slip under my skin?
Pretend to be me for a day,
To see this brutal world passing by,
Living through yet another nightmare,
Don’t you stop, you will make it out alive,
To feel the wrath in my pain,
Crawling through the ice in your veins,
Don’t you worry, my love will keep you warm,
To taste the agony in my bittersweet tears,
Dripping through your fiery eyes,
Don’t you forget, you’re wearing a disguise,
To smell the pungent vengeance in my blood,
Pumping violently through your fierce heart,
Don’t you quit, it’s just the beginning of falling apart,
To hear the noise of silence in my mind,
Embracing your demons through the night,
Don’t you fear, wait for the morning sun to shine bright,
So if you live each day like it is your last,
Aching in love and numbing the pain,
Will you dare to be me again?
A haunting dare with a positive message 🙂
Naima! you startled me with this ..
I thought if they knew we are hurting so much because of them then may be they wouldn’t be so cruel. It’s just the time when they step in our shoes.
-Naima
I wish this could happen
Karma may be? ;))
-Naima
yoo babe 😛
please, you owe me the truth Naima ….I begged you if you are my friend then tell me I have the right to know. I was just confused with the whole thing you see I’m isolated and the things I receive are the words that they want me to know. It’s devastating you know. I know you’ve been hurt the way I did. I just don’t know what happen here it blows my mind in particles and you know in the first place there were no poetry of love there I put it up. In the end just as the world want to know. In my honesty to wipe away my pain. Please tell me the truth and it shall set us free. We will be happy in the end I will make things as it was at the beginning. I was totaly broken by what transpired . I suffered immensely please have the courage to save me don’t hide anymore please ….I beg you. I do as I wanted to let the truth come out so I am begging you open your heart to me . To settle evrything.
I think my pain is more imaginary than anything else. I haven’t suffered anything like you — you are a very strong woman and I commend you for that. It’s probable that I have seen emotional and physical abuse affecting people and that might come out in my writing but mostly, it’s fiction. I am afraid there is nothing like ‘truth’ that I am not telling you.
Vivian, you are a wonderful woman inspiring everybody to fight until the end. Everyone don’t have a spirit like you. Take care and stay blessed.
-Naima
thank you ,Naima you’re a blessing .
ok i’ll keep my silence…..thank you for your love and care.
Silence or not, I always thank you for being around and reading my work. It’s greatly appreciated.
-Naima
are you in great pain dear…..dont worry we will support u the way we can.. 🙂 cheer up
I am fine, thank you for asking. We all are fighting battles within and mine are no different than everyone else’s. Thank you for your concern :))
Blessings and love,
-Naima
i hope you will be happy always 🙂 🙂 keep smiling 🙂
That’s very kind of you. I wish the same for you.
-Naima
feel free to come up with anything u want from me…i will try and help u with whatever i can 🙂
Naima, there is much to be thankful for. Please don’t hurt so much.
Indeed there is, even the pain because it teaches us we are stronger than we have thought of ourselves all along.
-Naima
Oh my god!! It touched me, Naima…
Thank you Nimmi!
Much love,
-Naima
Love to you too dear ❤ 🙂
This is a dare not only to the person who hurt us, its also for them who dish out “free advice”. Its easy for everyone to ask us to get a grip on life and move on, away from the pain. If only there was a way to let them experience the agony we are going through. If only they can understand this is not a choice but a penance.
I agree. As they say, we all are going through troubles in life but some just know to hide it better than others. Consoling and free-advice can become agitating sometimes.
-Naima
strong piece this one is an can feel it in every line. pain certainly is the teacher of all teachers and eventually it finds a way to be set free.
Indeed. Pain is to ensure that we get up after we fall down.
-Naima
:). I can relate. True words.